Here is a new poem, still in draft form. Please offer feedback!
Space for Jesus
by Paul Warloski
God loves a terrier
and wants to say
yes after failing the exam
three times in a row. As
a dedicated single, strange
occurrences and a great dancing
celebration bring friendships
into ambiguous circumstances.
He is a rising star afflicted
with memories of
something missing.
We want to know before
it breaks the original killer.
She is attracted to others
in withdrawal, disillusioned
by feeling special.
Finally, she falls in love
and climbs the ladder in a
surprise ending.
copyright 2009 by Paul Warloski
errr.... what?
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Not sure if it's a flashback or a current trip......Christine Warloski, what an interesting name from a former life.....
ReplyDeleteOnly your mom could like this Paul
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